中考優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文賞析點(diǎn)評(píng)
【習(xí)作要求】
請(qǐng)以Good Health為題寫一篇文章。
【參考范文】
GoodHealth
The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.
How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.
As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文層次清楚，邏輯分明，第一段講好身體的重要性，第二段講保持身體健康的種種方法，第三段講就“我”而言，“我”如何加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉。本文語(yǔ)言地道，亮點(diǎn)頗多，如：First… second… Finally…三個(gè)詞分述三種方法；The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等，這些短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用使得文章錯(cuò)落有致，多姿多彩。
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